generally, hard work is a key to success. most of individual opine that determination and hark work is fruitful to get success in life whereas other reject this notion, as they ponder that financial back ground is essential for success. this essay intends to analyze first, former and second, latter views along with my prospective in the forthcoming paragraphs.
the most important reason behind getting success by hard work is that one can tackle their problem with life experience and get motivated towards the ambition of life. to make it more clear, people who do hard work know the importance of even a small task and learn number of skills from life such as discipline, co-operation, patient as they wait for success while doing har work but they achieve it without financial help. no doubt, money is important to survive on the earth but hard work is more significant than it. for example : when a person do hard work, they have no time to think about anything else, as they focus on work.
in the paradoxical side, people think money is crucial to get success as it helps to get name and fame without any effort which contribute to effortless and convenient life. another key consideration point is that if a person has money he/she can fulfil their extra desire which they never except to fulfil with sufficient amount of money. besides, one can give money to get a high post and job to those whose only motivate to earn money. for example: in India, ther are many a famous person who do not do hard work but are famous because of their financial background status.
after looking at both facet ,one can reach to conclusion is that although money is essential to fulfil the desires in life but dedication and determination is rather beneficial for all because it is fruitful for the overall development of individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77287066246 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56324803654 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7510287979 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301732512247 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113584681436 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520971379562 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167691634832 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653726028243 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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