Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that digital life makes everything to become complicated and the best way to help life become simpler than before is not using technology. I do not agree with this view because of some reasons.
On the one hand, some people argue due to the development of high technology which makes their lives become complex more than in the past because people who cannot understand and catch the technology trend with the young generation. For example, older people who cannot use a smartphone or even though they do not understand how to use a simple cell phone. Besides, spending too much time to play smartphone which also brings some negative for people such as restriction their verbal skill with others.
Nevertheless, I believe that this opinion is quite ridiculous because everyone is living in industrialization with the promotion of developing the technology. For example, the majority of developing countries all over the world who always focus on the offer and improve technology in many fields. If any countries do not catch this trend, those countries can be lagging behind compared with the world. Moreover, it is clear that the advancement of technology has made human life easy going to a great extent. For instance, people can receive plenty of money through their bank account or they can use bank transfer for others that without going out, this made their life is safe and easy.
In summarize, although technology sometimes has many negative effects. However, people get a lot of benefits from digitization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0546875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70560760274 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58203125 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6688596017 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264844007018 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875580712531 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642838639877 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156443340596 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081625700576 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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