Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree
Admittedly, development of technology has caused a change in our lives. Some people argue that technology bring a negative impact to our lives and we should stop using it to make our lives simple. I partially agree with the statement. Thos essay will discuss about the pros and cons of technology and why we should not stop using it.
It is believed by some that technology makes life too complex because of the modern crime we recently heard. For instance, many electronic offences are being committed such as stalking and fraud offences. It is often to see or hear the news about innocent people especially teenagers and the aged has been fooled by scammer and lost a huge amount of money. That is why people gravitate toward the point of views.
Nevertheless, there is no denying that the advancement and development of technology has made our lives more convenient and effective than before. With the use of computers and machines, works become easier and progressive. Machines replaces human to complete a lot of tasks which human unable to achieve. With the help of technology, progress of industrialization and modernization has been accelerated. The advance of technology brings ample of benefits for us. Not only improve the standard and quality of life, but also made our lives easy going.
In summarize, for reasons related to e-crime as well as high-tech facilities use in industrial or our daily lives, the argument whether the technology makes life too complicated or convenient is refuted and support by many. But it is undeniable we use and enjoy the convenient that brought by the advance of technology everyday and it is impossible for people nowadays lives without it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 320, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...at brought by the advance of technology everyday and it is impossible for people nowaday...
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Line 13, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for people nowadays lives without it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06028368794 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84020416878 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9601984738 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29065447525 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08242969246 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08157663459 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1738000025 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561267004671 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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