Recently, some people have argued that the advancement of technology makes life complicated. They suggest that people should stop using technology in order to simplify their life. Personally, I totally disagree with this view.
First of all, it is noticeable that technology has made our lives more convenient than ever before. For instance, Tesla introduced an alpha version of an autonomous driving system that has allowed cars to move automatically without drivers controlling them. With all the additional help from sensors and cameras, it has become safer to let computer software to take control of vehicles, thus reducing accidents. This explains how technologies can help to simplify the lives of people; people no longer need to pay attention to the situations around them and they can make use of the travelling time to do something else. Moreover, smart home technologies minimise the number of routine activities performed by people such as controlling the air conditioner and checking for groceries at home. As a result, people can perform various activities using smart phones, making their lives easier and simpler.
Next, I believe that giving up modern technology would result in a much more complex society, and our lives will be difficult. For example, when the internet and phone technology were not popular in the past, a person needed to send a letter if he wanted to communicate with a friend far away. The whole process was complicated and it could take days until the sender received a response. In contrast, sending emails and text messages to each other through the internet nowadays is not only much easier, but also more cost effective and efficient. Moreover, instant response can be provided by the receiver without a time delay. Therefore, maintaining our globally distributed social network without using modern technology would indeed become complex and inconvenient.
In conclusion, technology can simplify our routine activities. Our lives will be much more complicated without the help of modern technology. Hence, I totally disagree with the idea of abandoning our current technology to make our lives simpler.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21700879765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71669502978 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 341.0 20.2975951904 1680% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1779.0 106.682146367 1668% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 341.0 20.7667163134 1642% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 149.0 7.06120827912 2110% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309976336944 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309976336944 0.084324248473 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215317860014 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104448979078 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 173.7 13.0946893788 1326% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -283.1 50.2224549098 -564% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 137.5 11.3001002004 1217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.67 8.58950901804 287% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 138.4 10.1190380762 1368% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 138.0 10.7795591182 1280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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