Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A lot of people believe that teenager should follow the advice and guidance of old people whereas, some argue these young people should be given the right to choose their own path. In my essay, I would shed light in both the notions and give my point of view.
On the first hand, some people believe that people of older generation are trustful because of their knowledge and experience. That is to mean, these people have already went through difficult life situations and thus have learnt the skills ways to tackle these problems which can be shared with others. Therefore, upon following their guidance and advice, a young adult can surely learn various lesson which will be fruitful for him/her in the future. For example, children’s raised by grandparents usually have a good humour and personality because of following things like advice, behaviour taught by their grandparents.
On the contrary, some people argue that following the examples of past generation is no longer suitable for the teenagers in this era of science and technology. The emerging developments of technology have made the lives of people much easier than in the past. So, the examples set by the older generations can no longer be beneficial for the people of new generation. To illustrate this, in terms of agriculture, it is beneficial for the young people to use the agricultural machinery and tools which adds more efficiency and speed in the farming work than to use the traditional farming methods used by the old people.
In conclusion, it is evident from both the discussion that both the arguments carry equal strength and significance, I personally subscribe to the preposition that young people shall follow guidance and examples of old people because they teach the best lesson and skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07094594595 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72304632387 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4036022713 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30252514925 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11629225834 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730911150538 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186783381287 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472547009376 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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