Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many argue that, advertisement must be stopped completely.However, I am disagree with the statement because it would be adversely affect our financial stability, public awareness, and lots of social services.
Advertising plays a major role in national economy through the international companies and some special brands. Likewise,many government projects and policies released in the form of advertisement.Such ads would create a crystal clear picture in viewers mind, even they are illiterate.Mesmerising social services and charity works also would emphasize the advertisement industry must be inevitable in this modern world. For instance, ads about the old age homes, child welfare centers and so on.
Meanwhile,people who oppose the advertisement reckon that, it would create a negative impact on public in discriminating relevant news and social situations.For example, publishing irrelevant ads about soft drinks and dress materials in between the news hours or in the news papers. Nevertheless, the main purpose of such ads to relax the spectators and to receive new content of exclusives in news rooms.Encouraging promulge of brands and companies would reach in public systematically to improve their social status and to know innovative products and services.
In conclusion, although some advertisement might create mild irritation,they would create a primitive effect on daily life of every person and our standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78873239437 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63395445572 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.028420848 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.142857143 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109167796243 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501241732653 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365258093304 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694734071709 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290752730296 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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