People in the current generation are not fit and active. This will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons for the inactivity and suggest solutions for this issue?
These days, the youngsters are likely to be less healthy and active than their ancestors. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, the government can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
There are two primary reasons why the current generation are not in shape and immobile. One reason is that the children prefer to eat fast food or pre-made food, which will lead to rapid weigh gain and these young consumers become more and more obese. Take the Vietnamese children as an example, parents are busy with their jobs, so they cannot prepare the proper meals for their children after school. Another reason is that numerous people spend an unhealthy amount of time gadget’s screens such as working and playing games on the computers. Additionally, public transportations like bus and car are the main vehicles for them to commute from place to place, which this dependence is the major culprit to form the inactive lifestyle.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be the government should raise people’s awareness of the risks associated with excessive consumption of imbalanced diets. A second measure would be that the local sporting competitions should be regularly organized to enhance the residents’ health. An obvious witness of this point is that Ho Chi Minh city holds the athletics events twice a year, which attracts a thousand of participants. As a result, this activity would encourage the individuals to change their inactive patterns in the community.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for detrimental healthy life of the youngsters in terms of unhealthy meals and sedentary lifestyles. Nevertheless, the stimulations of taking part in physical activities by the government are the significant steps to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3468013468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86528623465 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.06824674 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310434238273 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933528583307 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435690168713 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163102403966 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337650768788 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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