Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The issue of universities’ curricular is a great concern in society. Some people advise institutions to apply students with more factual understanding instead of academic knowledge. Others do not suppose that. But in my opinion, I completely agree with the statement.
To begin with, nobody can deny that academic knowledge has pivotal importance. Students should have basic understanding of the field which is the basis of working in the future. However, nowadays most students lack practical knowledge that just can be gained from experience because institutions, in fact, focus on academic lessons. Thus, most graduates have to be retrained after hired and recruiters rarely find graduates who are both knowledgeable and skilled.
Moreover, an amount of knowledge they gain in university hardly have applicability, even some information is outdated/not up-to-date. It actually causes time and money lavishness for enterprises and employees. Hence, the combination of academic knowledge and hands-on activities is extremely essential for college students. Universities should give more chances for students to experience practice so as to fill the gap of factual knowledge.
Briefly, I think institutions should attach more importance to practical training, but do not forget to improve the quality of theoretical education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, but, hence, however, moreover, so, thus, as to, even so, i think, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78680203046 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26130182088 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0643737399 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6923076923 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247617506341 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785794674565 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059774808073 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148782078261 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045042809362 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.71 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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