some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
the question of what are solutions to traffic issues is open to debate. some people think that residents should move to urban cities instead of rural areas in an attempt to deal with traffic congestion. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the idea because it is likely that there are the implications for traffic congestion if people drastically move to big cities.
First, moving to central cities could make congested traffic more severe in that the situation of traffic in cities is currently congested and urban areas are densely populated, which leads to increasing problems about infrastructure such as wear and tear on city streets.
Second, there are several measures that we could implement to relieve traffic congestion such as using carpooling and public transportation system. This could reduce the volume of vehicles in traffic that causes gridlock during rush hour. Moreover, we can improve traffic infrastructure to make the society mobile so that commuters could easily travel from home to work, meaning reduce the waiting time for people to safely navigate intersections
In conclusion, I think we should introduce other solutions to traffic problems rather than migrating to cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3612565445 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75449399926 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0697391654 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240622119244 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106563187112 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553492894383 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151528020703 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059382627886 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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