Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Should universities provide alumnus with the knowledge and skills needed in the work environment has been a debating topic in recent years. Debaters divide into two groups, one group agree that higher education establishment should do it, while the other group believe the origin objective of tertiary institutions is to give access to knowledge for its own sake, no matter whether the lesson is useful to a manager or not. Personally, I have evidence to say that universities don't provide enough knowledge and skills for their student to survive in the real workplace.
First of all, we have to understand the fact that workplace isn't like any class, there is nothing such as doing something again if it has been done the wrong way. In a work environment, if I make a flaw, I will have to be responsible for it, which could end up making me losing my money. That is the most important thing university does not teach their pupil.
Furthermore, I bet every single student have ever participate in team project. And when the teacher mark the score, they mark each individual separately. This has lead many people to think that when doing team project at work, they only need to do their job and ignore others work. Believe it or not, this is the biggest mistake school and university have taught their students. In real workplace, the boss only look at the team final result (remember that all the team not only one individual), and if I done my part really well but others not do their part well, our team will still get reprimand no matter that isn't my fault. This happens due to the fact that manager only care about the team result, not your.
In conclusion, I believe university main function is to teach students about skills to survive in the workplace where you can easily be fired just by your team small mistake no matter who causes it, not to teach something not even related to what the graduates really need to know.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46640293136 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4375716039 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267549006919 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841596948846 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861278558767 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158551520221 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123321132785 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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