some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In modern society, career is believed to play the most significant role in humans' life, hence life will be incomplete without acheivements from work. To a certain extent, I would agree with the importance of work, however, people will find it hard to fullfil their lives if family is ignored.
It is true that work is important since it helps people earn a living and gain respect. Indeed, had it not been for hours spent on work, we would not have been able to earn money which is used to purchase indispensible daily items and to pay for compulsory fees such as parking services or tuition fees for children. Besides helping people meet their material demands, work enables devoters to get appreciation from other people. To be specific, people who have high positions in workplace have a tendency to be esteemed by coworkers since the more power they hold, the greater impacts they have on their staff.
Concerning a meaningful life, family has an equal significance as career . Without unconditional love and supports from beloveds , we can hardly overcome numerous stress from work as well as have the motivation to quickly complete tasks assigned in order to come back home. It is argued that respect from colleagues can be a substitution for family's love, however, it is uncertain whether they will support us when we no longer have power. Meanwhile, family members are those who always love and protect us under any circumstances.
All in all, career and family play equally vital role in humans'life. It is recommended that we should balance work and life in order to enjoy the full happiness.
- Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 59
- In some countries parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and after school and have less free time What are the possitive and negative effects on children and society they live in 86
- some people think that work is the most important thing of people s life Without the success of career life will become meaningless To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 51
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mily has an equal significance as career . Without unconditional love and supports...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ditional love and supports from beloveds , we can hardly overcome numerous stress ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93014705882 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512140364 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5109311602 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209374063858 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847235189262 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730376250626 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144758357612 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104463089643 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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