Pursuing a successful career is being more and more people’s eternal goal. Even some believe that only having a successful career would lead to a meaningful life. Otherwise, life is nothing to them. For my perspective, to lead to a healthy and ambitious life includes having a good job, but life is far more than work. And there are many other aspects of life as important as a decent job.
On the one hand, a well-paid job means many things to people, such as good healthcare, adequate pension, insurance and high social prestige. Now people are living in a customer culture, which means that how much people earn decides how good the standard of living is. A good salary is an efficient way to improve people’s satisfaction about their lives. People can rebuild their self-esteem through pursuing their careers. When people are no longer worried about future healthcare and insurance, they are more likely to be confident, and their brains are more active. But, unfortunately, not anyone has abilities to become workaholics and has chances to achieve their career goals. Hopefully, life is more complex to define.
On the other hand, life expectancy includes many factors, such as health, friendship, family, contribution to societies and nations. Health is the foundation of other parts. Without health, dreams are always untouched. Good relationships with friends will supply many mental supports to people, making people realise what is the treasure in life. Friends are not only the companions on the course of people’s growth, but also play an important role when people face difficulties. Families are the most mentioned reason that people work so hard, so do not neglect the feelings of family members when pursuing a good job position. Contribution to societies and nations is also a great achievement even just in a tiny region.
In conclusion, there are many achievement people can make, each of which will determine the meaning of life. Life is short, and everyone can live a different life.
- In some countries, parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and after school and have less free time. What are the possitive and negative effects on children and society they live in 84
- Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV Discuss both views and give your own opinions 95
- some people think that work is the most important thing of people s life Without the success of career life will become meaningless To what extent do you agree or disagree 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... customer culture, which means that how much people earn decides how good the standa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, even so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13595166163 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79625163255 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0591241776 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9523809524 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7619047619 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346502060835 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968402493049 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551457820849 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21454121338 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457151247081 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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