In the world of intermingled and juxtaposed nations, people keep a standpoint of preserving the distinct social traditions by young generation. However, some advocate the opposed that individual behavior of minority need to be respected. As well as offering my opinion, both given justifications of this phenomenon will be discussed in this essay in depth.
On the one hand, there is no denying that traditional-features's preservation has it owns moral advantages. Specifically, forefather's experiences may support the teens life, for instance, Vietnamese historical value is a great proof of community spirit which cultivate them a sense of national solidary and patriotism. As a result, this can make the community more organized and civilized while the minority nowadays being more and more considerate and outgoing. However, unfortunately, if the traditions are not continuously inherited, it properly will fade and disappear throughout some generations. Therefore, it is reasonable of preserving the traditional culture in a long term.
As the opposed, many people may harbor a concern those teens could freely behave as what they want to do. As a matter of fact, there is a widespread consensus of independently behave involves stimulation of creativity and innovation which greatly stimulate them to make more effort for their lives. In illustrate, many young people gained their family's support which is a precursor of theirs succeed life in the future. Moreover, this is an unfairly acting for teens to follow those outdated and decadent traditions which no longer suitable. There is no denying that young generations nowadays are living in the different world to their ancestor, hence, embracing the old traditional path prevent young people to adapt the movement of the world today.
In conclusion, while a group of people still believe the imposition on the young generations of the traditions, my opinion is provided uphold the unrestrained behavior of minority and the free expression of their personalities. They have the right to assert and be themselves because they are leading the new world with the different rules and regimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teens'' or 'teen's'?
Suggestion: teens'; teen's
...forefathers experiences may support the teens life, for instance, Vietnamese historic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42089552239 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19542444098 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.323056453 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24471832063 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747342180523 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431380856322 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145308918616 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541926323086 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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