In this modern world, people are craving for well-experienced employees, since personal skills are now significantly important in the operation of some work. Therefore, the phenomenon of young people take part in unsalaried work is becoming trendy. However, there are a number of people being against this trend since they believe that it can ruin their future. Personally, I partly disagree with this trendy and this essay will elaborate on both sides of this issue.
On the one hand, involving in unpaid work is indeed bring numerous distinguished advantages for young people. Having an earlier approach to a job is a opportunity for youngsters to enrich their experience. Due to the necessity of experienced employees nowadays, people with more year of worktime will possess more chances of being employed. Moreover, working for an unpaid job also gives youngster a boost for their career in a distant future as they can bolster up theirs skill and acquire new techniques. In the end, they will become well-rounded employees.
On the other hand, joining in unsalaried work can severely affect your career in some aspects. Because of spending time working for unpaid job, youngsters will devote their studying time to work. However, having array of certificates and diplomas is the most efficient way to have a job with a lucrative income, and sticking to studying work is the only way to do so. Therefore, having a job that interrupts your study is a hindrance that dwindle your well-paid job opportunity. In lieu of taking part in those work, people still can gain working experience through volunteering activities or ongoing trainings.
In short, getting involved in unpaid job can benefit us in myriad of ways, but it is time-consuming simultaneously. As far as I know, I highly suggest that people should stick to their studying work for better jobs in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...and, involving in unpaid work is indeed bring numerous distinguished advantages for y...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Having an earlier approach to a job is a opportunity for youngsters to enrich th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11038961039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88549246929 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4445984011 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265583156624 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877665730798 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059966651732 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157108339535 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355386497798 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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