Some people think that zoo's are cruel and all coo should be closed . While others believe that zoo's are useful for protecting rare species . Discuss both views and give your opinion .
In this modernisation world , national animal protection authorities used to create a forest atmosphere to keep species into their captivity which is called zoo. Some proponents advocate that zoos' are beneficial for preventing species which are on red alert . whereas, some opponents believe that this type of animals captive is cruel . According to my point of view , zoo play a Cardinal role in the protection of rare species . Both the views regarding above give statement would be discussed in the I upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective .
To begin with, because of keeping animals and birds into their captivity they did not get a chance to make new friends and feel distract from their families . Consequently live life alone they behave aggressively as a result sometimes these angry species killed to their owners . Moreover , cage forest animals are become an inactive and an impowerful then Forest species sometime loneliness is prove a significant aspect in their death . Spending more life into zoo leads them towards a unhealthy or stressful environment . Therefore , it should be closed .
On the paradoxical side , zoo's are more useful in the reservation of species those breeds are near to the ending point. To illustrate , two years back in India population of black deer and tigers decreased to the dangerous level , but at the right time Indian's national animal and bird protection association are out a banned on the hunting of these species ,hunters are heavily fined if they killed them with imprisonment . Gradual black dear and tigers come from danger level. Secondly , state governments earn a lot of revenue from zoo's , children and masses used to visit these places at Holiday . It is a great way for masses to get awareness about umpteen animal varieties .
To recapitulate , I contended that zoo's are beneficial to protect an indangerd breeds but it is merely possible by providing them a familiar and healthy Atmosphere otherwise it proved to be cruel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17757009346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81929172866 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5418609813 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243961529823 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850484353721 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623530664044 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145876996643 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891463124785 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.