Nowadays most people rely on readymade food due to their excessive busy routine band find it an esay way to satisfy their health on one way or the other . To what extent do you agree or disagree .
In this fast growing pace of life , masses indulge in their office work and in other activities , they have no time to cook cushions for themselves that's what they depend on restaurant food to satisfy their hungry stomach . But some people advocate that fast food or junk food badly impact on human health in various ways . I utterly concur with that fast food hazard for our health . Reason behind agreeing with above given statement would be discussed in the subsequent sections of the essay .
To begin with , being globalization and modernisation people are involving with umpteen working activities for the survival in the society . Because of no time for cooking they relish ready-made food items that is unhygienic and lack of nutrients . Consequently they are suffer with diverse ailments like obesity , cancer , overweight and hear diseases . To illustrate , according to the United Nation report of 2011 , 55% of world population rely over ready-made food that's why obesity and overweight patients ratio growing eminently .
Despite , our younger generation has become inactive and is less interested in sport practices as a result nation builders are not capable to lead their country among others countries . Earlier individual gave more emphasis over providing hygienic and full of nutrients and minerals edible products to their offsprings , which leads to their pupil come forward and take parts in physical games . To exemplify , my cousin Mostly having junk food and they lose their stamina, they have no strength to participate in sports .
To recapitulate , having fast food in excess quantity effect to our health system . Therefore , nations government and parents should have to come together to eliminate this bad habit . parents need to be give to their children home cooked food whereas government needs to impose heavy goods and service tax over that kind of items .
- Nowadays consumer goods have become the most popular part of people's life .what are advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend .Discuss and give opinion. 56
- While recruiting a new new employee ,the employer should pay attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree and disagree .Give your opinion and include relevant examples. 84
- Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access and exchange of information . Far from being beneficial this is a danger to our society ,what is your view? 84
- More and more people want own popular branded clothes , cars and other items .what is the reason behind this . its a negative or positive change . 56
- People wants to own popular clothes , cars and other item .What are the reason behind this . its a positive change or negative change . 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, whereas, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29431438127 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66078246266 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1675800974 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188430521483 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613378459436 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472541338251 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109938038081 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572058715716 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.