Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are wrong. Get ready to talk to an examiner about this issue.
Some people are in the opinion that when they visit others at a glance and give sens about this moment, This initially effect is generally right. But, other people oppose this view and opine that human beings must not make the decision about other peoples' personalities first when they meet them because it might be wrong insomnia about others' characteristics. Like many other debatable ,issues both views have their own rational reasoning.
On the one hand, people really admire and appreciate their feelings about everything that may happen in the surrounded world. Hence when they meet someone and get bad feelings in the first step, They reach the conclusion that their impressions about that person would not change anyway. For instance, whenever they visit someone who is mad and somehow rude at that exact time they believe that he or she is a rude person who can not control him or herself in the different situations and he or she annoys anyone that communicates with him or her.
Apart from this, other more rational people claim that we should not make a decision about others just after one meeting. Because our emotions are not true always and it is an unfair judgment to talk about peoples' attributes when we face them for the first time. Furthermore, they claim that human beings are known for their total treatment not just as one of their behaviour at particular times.
In my honest point of view, I strongly agree with the second group who state that we should talk about someone's personality by considering whole behaviours which may happen to them, not a specific one in a special moment. Because people's characteristic framework is included both bad and good treatments and habits that they may do.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n they visit others at a glance and give sens about this moment, This initially e...
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...aracteristics. Like many other debatable ,issues both views have their own rationa...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...hat may happen in the surrounded world. Hence when they meet someone and get bad feel...
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...n the different situations and he or she annoys anyone that communicates with him...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t others just after one meeting. Because our emotions are not true always and it...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ecause our emotions are not true always and it is an unfair judgment to talk abo...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...cond group who state that we should talk about someones personality by considerin...
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Suggestion:
...pecific one in a special moment. Because peoples characteristic framework is incl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, second, so, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90443686007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4540412092 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8004754437 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362442839894 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134235967246 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749475779021 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209036722489 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457425918144 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n they visit others at a glance and give sens about this moment, This initially e...
^^
Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aracteristics. Like many other debatable ,issues both views have their own rationa...
^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...hat may happen in the surrounded world. Hence when they meet someone and get bad feel...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the different situations and he or she annoys anyone that communicates with him...
^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t others just after one meeting. Because our emotions are not true always and it...
^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause our emotions are not true always and it is an unfair judgment to talk abo...
^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cond group who state that we should talk about someones personality by considerin...
^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pecific one in a special moment. Because peoples characteristic framework is incl...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, second, so, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90443686007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4540412092 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8004754437 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362442839894 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134235967246 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749475779021 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209036722489 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457425918144 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.