Some people work for the same organisation all their working life others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life others think that it is better to work for different organisations.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that different between same organisation and different organisation.some people wprk for same job, on the other side, some people believe do different jobs. I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up both sides opinion by the end.

On the one side, some people think that, doing a simple job is better than doing different jobs as well as separate job have many facilities.for example, who is done single work, he has more time for his family as compare to other one who is done multiple job.if, a person do single job that is the symbol of loyality and inosense.he get a promotion and at the end of job he get hos saved money.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anisation.some people wprk for same job, on the other side, some people believe d...
^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... the symbol of loyality and inosense.he get a promotion and at the end of job he ge...
^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...et a promotion and at the end of job he get hos saved money.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 138.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74637681159 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80891288551 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.422813027 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.333333333 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214094316305 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130393081123 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643995105475 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165851005595 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314829903261 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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