some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Other think that it is better to work for diffrent organisation. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion
work plays an integral part in our life. work is a first step to fulfil our needs. nowadays everyone want to job to complete our dreams. today the given topic asserts that should people want to change; Job or not? Through this essay i shall explore the dimension and shape up my opinion at the end.
On one side, there are many advantages in a single job. They strength the view point clamng that lot of experience because when the person do single job in our daily lifeas wellas also do same things to day by day. They have been many experience about this job like that how to complete this work how to tackle this problem and so on. Foe example when a person do job on front desk manager job and also know about how to complete the responbilities Moreover, employers also make a good relationship with owners.
On the other side, there are many people who beleive that multiple job are many advantages for anyone. The view point claming that earning more money. In the modern era, everyone have many dreams and they also want to fulfil our dreams in our life but sometimes people do not satisfied and do not earn more money on a single job on that time person want to change the job to fulfil our dreams. For example a recent survey conducted the Hindustan times 7 out of 10 people in india have been changing the job by month to month and year to year because they think that it is a good option to fulfil our dreams.
As we have seen that, there are number of answer to this question. I am balancing, however, i tend to beleive that it depend from person to person and gow to think about it to fulfil our dreams. Futhermore, everyjob have own benefits so that why both are amazing for everyone.
- Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 80
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfication. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Big salary is more important than job satisfication. Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Work
work plays an integral part in our life. wor...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Work
...ork plays an integral part in our life. work is a first step to fulfil our needs. no...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...rk is a first step to fulfil our needs. nowadays everyone want to job to complete our dr...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
...one want to job to complete our dreams. today the given topic asserts that should peo...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... change; Job or not? Through this essay i shall explore the dimension and shape u...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...me things to day by day. They have been many experience about this job like that how to complet...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this question. I am balancing, however, i tend to beleive that it depend from per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3880126183 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20419194269 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8481717063 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127115762549 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050118815465 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481754237083 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830952273726 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294310689712 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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