Some peopre think that to be successful, you need to get in a university education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss and give your opinion.
While some others proposed that are going to university will be becoming a successful person, some people believed that it is inessential. It is hardly defined how to get a successful life, and what is certain is that people got everything which is in with adequate all aspects of their life. However, people who are out there, have fulfilled lives and are not excess financial, they are enriched with the values and are enjoyable that is formed by positive own’s mind. In this essay, a university education is barely considered in comparison to success life.
First of all, if they would be in specializing domains such as lawyers, engineering, or medicine, the university is where they could be acquiring professional knowledge in these fields. Furthermore, that they will be made up their career ladder thanks to undergoing education at the university. What is more, the university would be spreading out the connection of own’s friends or colleagues, if any trouble has happened in our lives, we can rely on these relationships that be boosted energy and motivate towards successful life about how to be achieved it.
On the other hand, not all of us need have to be university-educated to getting success, sometimes, concerning the inner self, one of us have just lacked personal traits that much like effort, skeptical own’s self when we do something else. That it leads to not overcome obstacles and nor pursuit their desires to put forwards. Indeed, Henry Ford is an entrepreneur of Ford Brand who had been never completed a high school degree. Nevertheless, he proved himself that could be a person influential in the car industry with his company reached the largest automobile manufacturing which many people are almost known as the Ford Motor Company.
In conclusion, going to university are worth looking at it well as human beings gained the knowledge based on this, it is meant that they will be allowing investigates all the secrets have had not ever sought over the world. Eventually, it depends on each condition that gets into account of their decisions about university education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06017191977 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90327029668 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9091166431 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211277271979 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757539969777 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622236939177 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128315507361 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264829408802 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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