Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Owing to the rapid population in the present day, many challenges put on press all aspects of our lives, in which, as mentioned the extension of vertical land might satisfy with their desirables. As opposed to this object, the horizontal spreads could be better than ever, which will be preserving of land for other purposes in the future. From my perspective, an expanding taller building seemed a better solution than encouraging urban sprawl.
On the positive side, it is irrefutable that paying for a private house on the ground is too high cost and is overused land funds which can be caused to lack of trees and are not enough shades for people are settling. Indeed, people are living in Hong Kong who could not be able to purchase their houses. What is mean that is the land had been boosted to the threshold that many people in all levels hardly to do that. To rectify this matter, the government in many countries suggested that allowing real estate companies are constructing much of a unique building with it more space and attached to facilities advance for residents. Whereby, individuals living in their apartments often have greater feelings of satisfaction.
On the other side, thereby establishing the vertical city, people are getting more amenities more than ever had. It points out a city with less usage land which will be prompted to use it for dwellers. It is manifest that the government would be accompanied to use this land for residents such as investing more land to build healthcare systems, schools and recreation place that can be the capability to be please those who are living in own country
In conclusion, the vertical city is comparatively making conditions to some positives living there. Nevertheless, it is important to alleviate the issues caused by growing urban populations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9868852459 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74624172105 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5935792928 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110657294927 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398503855989 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331018056755 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805345040334 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404387452963 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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