In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?
When it comes to communicate with others, one of the difficult relationships for human-beings could be with people who are not in the same age with them. This issue has had several reasons such as having various hobbies and interests which will be explained in this essay. And also solutions which could be taken in order to solve this concern will be mentioned as well.
To commence with, one of the significant causes of this difficulty which youngsters have had hard time to connect with older people have been their various personalities and hobbies. However, young people have been fond of being more active or doing adventurous actions such as hiking, diving into water older people have not been able to do these activities. This is because of old people not only disability to do such exciting activities even if they have a keen to do it, but also the alteration in their behavior which has led them to enjoy more relaxing ones. Consequently, this has propelled people with various age group to not be able to connect to each other because they cannot do the same activities.
To addict, in order to solve this issue which has been extremely hard for both young and old humans to have a deep connection with each other, there have been several solutions that could be taken. Firstly, although individuals with diverse ages have been interested in different activities, some similar ones should be created by considering both of their interests. In fact, these created hobbies could conclude adventurous ones but with lower activity which older people could be able to join them. For example, swimming in average depth pools where not only young people could do breathtaking events like diving or jet skiing, but also old people could be swim or even walk in the swimming pool. As a result, even though they will be doing various actions, they will be with each other and could get a connection during their fun.
In conclusion, even individuals with same ages have had diverse interests which has led them to not be able to communicate with each other. But this differences have been more obvious when it comes to old and young people. To give reasons for this issue, one considerable one which has been their diverse interests has been mentioned in this essay. Moreover, one of the main solution of this issue could be to create some activities which will be based on both of their preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83574879227 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51361435696 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42270531401 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.9586809677 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235454640495 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102013517313 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474531965797 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174646606827 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259970764439 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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