Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
females up to now did not achieve equal rights as males attain, because of masculine fairness in our society. In my opinion, discrimination has been happening up to now, so girls do not have the advantage of the same rights that boys are having. some of the backward societies believe that women must be attached to the kitchen and home working operations. It is not much familiar to the females and their position in society. I believe females need equal rights as males are having in society.
The opposite view, in my opinion, people in some areas envisioned based on their traditions. females in those areas traditions played an important role in the rights of women. For example, when we have taken the backward states of India women are attached to their houses because of their traditions that coming the past years. In their lives, males are having all rights in home and society. they are the decision-makers, so females does not have the right to make decisions, because traditions they are following from the ancestors period and they believed that they can take care of the home activities in kitchen and children’s activites. somehow this better for the females to respect their traditions.
Personally, i believe that women need equal rights because those whole believing tradition must follow, but tradition is not their whole life to develop their lives as modern situations occurred in society. Governments must develop equal laws as men are having, but how some developed countries in the world had implemented equal rights in their countries for women, so they achieved high growth in all aspects of the society, same rights for women is the justice for their development of image in the society.
In conclusion, equal rights for females should not be decreased based on their gender equality, this not fair for their development, so I believe rights for men is must be equal to the rights for women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04012345679 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62529891752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450617283951 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9067600675 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662309532779 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305163116228 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301679117268 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471507926597 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148637314294 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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