Throughout history, people always have been dreaming about how to build a higher building and live in the sky. Accordingly, some people believe that living in such apartments is not suitable for mental health whereas, others think this is very beneficial to live in the top of the towers.
It is argued that, people who live in a skyscraper after a while feeling depression and anxiety disorder. Obviously, living in a high building has own difficulties; for example, there are many families who live in an apartment complex but they do not know each other and everybody trying to avoid make friendship or contact with another neighbor, also it is many roles in this towers which does not allow residents throwing parties or keeping pets in their flat so that this kind of situation could lead people to get lonely more and more during the time.
On the other hand, some insist on there are many advantages to living in a skyscraper. For instance, there are many facilities in these buildings like the gym, swimming pool, clubs, shopping center even school for the resident's children and people could use all of them anytime that they want. Also, they can feel safe and secure in their homes because of the security system and high-quality technology equipment that the building has for the case of an emergency like a fire or earthquake.
Although there are many benefits to live in a high-rise apartment like the view of the city or the facilities, in point of my view, loneliness is not the only problem for people who live in towers. As an illustration, research shows that the pressure of the air could affect the human body and cause serious diseases like blood pressure, heart attack or vertigo, especially for older people.
In conclusion, towers are built faster than in the past by companies and individuals prefer to live there because of the technological improvement in this building have and in the modern world being alone has become an inevitable part of people’s life.
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. 67
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion 73
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Describe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he 84
- People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.Is it a positive or negative development? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
Throughout history, people always have been dreaming about how to build a higher bu...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ther neighbor, also it is many roles in this towers which does not allow residents t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evitable part of people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90882352941 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63055475881 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9541219143 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.9 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200196289705 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874223328066 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671348652276 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109280348945 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341977365399 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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