Some say that people working in different job rules get different amount of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and example from your own experience.

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Some say that people working in different job rules get different amount of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and example from your own experience.

In recent years, according to variant sort of jobs rules some individuals obtain miscellaneous off time from office. This trend is growing up by leaps and bound which some section of society like and another dislike. Here, I agree with their opinion upto great extent for miscellaneous reasons which are elaborate in the following passages.

There are numerous keys to support my point of view. The first and foremost thing striking to my is that time by time, in market, there are plethora jobs and every single day individuals are hired and fired at work place on account of some argues, late reached at office , and misbehave with seniors so on. Furthermore, now a days, due to unprecedented jobs in market there are different shift timing of jobs, because of job timing individuals do not have certain fix holiday. So, consequently, individuals obtain off time from company in week days. For instance, in India in government bureau a security guard is not able to take holiday on Sunday despite he has 4 holiday in month.

Although, there are not only single section to do job which provide off day in week days, there are also many type of job which has fix day to bestow one holiday in week. Since, not only government sectors but also private sector as well provide certain day to close the office. For instance, Automobile sector, IT sectors, small scale companies as well as large scale industries. Yet, the statistic are revealed that because of requisite, it is compulsory to do job without consider the shift start or end and thoughtlessly the fix holiday.

To recapitulate, it is reiterated that due to hectic schedule individuals have lack of time to think individually. Many of them people do a job at alarming rate, it is a burning issue. Thus, people are suppose to think their own and spend their quality time with their family.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for instance, sort of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84591194969 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65500030901 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1973802374 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211829130881 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645657812865 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514720425975 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120024125313 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374155732329 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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