A highly controversial issue today relates to whether expanding the number of sports equipments is the most effective method to enhance health condition or not. In this essay, I am going to examine the question from both points of view and then give my own perspective on the matter.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of increase the sports facilities considerably outweigh its disavantage. The main reason for believing this is that playing sports is able to make people become active and flexible. It is also possible to say that a person indulging in regular sports not only have better physical body but also improve the mental health. One good illustration of this is doing yoga, which has ability to help us reduce heart diseas and relieve stress.
On the other hand, it os also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact there are many additional ways to improve physical condition. First of all, following a nutrious diet can maintain sufficent health. This is mainly because a balanced diet make sure the amount of supplements required to the body is supplied in an efficient way. A seconf point is that we should get rif of bad habits such as drinking alcohol, staying up late, and so on. One particular example of this believing is that smoking can have detrimental effects on our health as it causes cancers
In conclusion, I believing both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that if we combine both doing sports and others measures, we can have a better healthy level and enjoy the quality of life more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57184880771 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5229321845 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175514062342 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510936096837 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429019096558 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101710757919 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297078536986 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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