Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that physical activities have positive impacts on society. Others, however, believe that playing sports simply only is relaxation. In my perspective, I am convinced that sport does have an important function in public and people, and this essay will discuss both points of view.
To begin with, in bustle and hustle society today, people have experienced very pressure in their life like work, family or relationships. Having many kinds of entertainment and among them, dwellers choice sport as a tool to reduce the burden of lives. Besides, citizens participate in sporting exercises also have many other reasons, including, wanting to get fit or stay in shape or improving health, especially for officers. Spending time playing sport with friends and family supports to strengthen connections.
On the other hand, even though most individuals use gymnastics for personal purposes, it does also serve a number of significant roles within society. Firstly, sport creates healthier societies. In other words, scientists prove that people who often play sport are known to be happier and healthier, and less prone to create certain mental and physical illness, which decreases not only the burden for governments when they do not invest huge amounts of money in public medical systems but also limits overload situation in hospitals. Secondly, team sports such as football, baseball and so on will assist players to improve solidarity, discipline and ability to concentrate, which make citizens better and useful to society.
In conclusion, with the reasons aforementioned above, I believe that physical activities bring unbelievable benefits to humans and society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45247148289 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81459239403 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67680608365 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1478908818 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167467681746 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588266546727 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372254750302 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993224021681 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048786849674 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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