Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, most pupils often give precedence to embarking on university after their high school graduation. Nevertheless, more and more ones choose another option, which is taking a gap year, has been a topic of public interest. Each has its own perks, but I personally lean toward the latter for some reasons provided below.
It is understandable why many people subcribe to the idea that pupils should have access to university immediately after finishing high school level. First, it is obvious that gap year takers would lose momentum. This might lead to the fact that students could fall behind and find it immensely hard to resume their study as usual. Also, once people take advantage of gap year to look for jobs as well as earn some money, they probably do not long to get back to their study because of the allure of salary or chances which they can climb higher positions in their jobs.
Despite aforementioned drawbacks, I am convinced that it will pale in comparision with benefits if we take into account in more detail. The first one is that pupils can blow off some steam or take park in extracurricular or recreational activities after graduation. This can be hard to do as they have to immerse themselves in their intense work study if attending university immediately. On top of that, as more and more high schools provide inadepquate career guidance, sparing several months to look for suitable jobs is imperetive. For instance, pupils can take advantage of gap year to travel somewhere in order to discover their own interests or pick up some languages to enrich knowledge for themselves, then they could make their own decisions to set up important goals and choose a suitable major when attending university.
In conclusion, while the drawbacks of taking a gap year between high school and university are undeniable, I would content that this will benefit pupils if we consider thoroughly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95341614907 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75028538033 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1659985517 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300797820215 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972501157028 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549908031781 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19755103006 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321782967203 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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