Nowadays, yong people tend to take a year off between graduated high school and going to college to travel or to work. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative effects consequences in equal measure.
On the one hand, there are many positive impacts from this trend. The first is that It helps students to relax after the test for graduate. Because teenagers have to tried to finishing school. Thus, they need to travel to refesh stressful. Additionally, Young people have more experiences for in the future. Because when you work before graduated university, it helps you gain hands-on experiences and have good experiencing.
However, this trend also have drawback. Firstly, we are going to not want to learn. For example, in vietnam, dropping out of school rate after one year going to work or to travel is more and more increaced. Secondly, some students tend to get married. For instance, my cousin had a baby after she graduated her high school.
In conclusion, Nowadays, yong people tend to take a year off between graduated high school and going to college to travel or to work. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative effects consequences in equal measure.
- Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s to relax after the test for graduate. Because teenagers have to tried to finishing sc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... want to learn. For example, in vietnam, dropping out of school rate after one ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96585365854 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59535117271 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.882422883 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259606773991 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869473754863 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09651020823 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178686365983 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326164527511 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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