Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
A major problem today's students face is stress due to limited study time whilst balancing a full-time work life. In this essay i will examine the causes of the study time shortages and how to resolve this issue.
The two main reasons why youngsters choose to work are to either help lessen the burden of university fees on their parents and to afford luxury items. At home, when teenagers see their hardworking parents shattered, fragile and filled with fatigue from long working hours, they feel the need to help. For instance, if a student works part time for 20 hours per week, he or she can help pay off their own monthly rent. Thus, making their parents lives easier. Moreover, young people like to enjoy their lives and splash on luxury items. Even though parents provide for their yearly expenses, most of the time its not enough to buy latest gadgets, fashionable clothes or branded shoes. Hence, students pick up part-time jobs to afford such expensive things. Overall, low family economic status is the reason why students choose to work.
Some possible solutions to this problem may be educating students to take advantage of student loan or training them to be highly organised and motivated. In majority of he countries student loans are available from banks. This money is usually at 0% interest fee and only needs to be payed back once the student graduates and start working. Thus, students can focus more time on their studies and only worry about university fees later. Furthermore, finding the fine balance between work life and student life can be highly beneficial for students. Universities can set up programmes that help students to be more organised and schedule their time effectively. For example, study every week day and work every weekends. This way students have enough time to study as well as work.
To conclude, education is very important. Although, being financially independent at an young age is applaudable it shouldn't cost your education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00604229607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47872999179 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625377643505 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9779930814 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24236149208 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775066611329 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607384363489 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141901688329 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853469038715 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.