Some Think That It Is More Important For Children To Engage In Outdoor Activities Instead Of Playing Video Games
Some people argue that they should let their kids to play outdoor activities instead of playing video games. Personally, I partly agree with this opinion and this essay will provide suitable reasons with explains and examples.
There are many advantages of supporting children to do outdoor activities. The first benefit is that children can play some sports such as football, basketball, and so on, which helps them improve both strength and stamina effectively. It also makes children gain a high immune system, which prevents lots of common diseases like fever, sore throat. Moreover, when kids play outdoor activities with friends, it creates a high opportunity to increase their friendships tightly. This also improves their communication skill greatly, which leads to being more mature in their future path.
On the other hand, It is unavoidable that we are living in an era in which entertainment activities are very developing, especially video games. Therefore, letting them play video games after a hard working day is a great way to relax and relieve stress. Moreover, video games have a lot of kinds suit for children and if parents allow their child to play these games, it will broaden children's knowledge and their imagination. For example, Minecraft is a video game that allows children to build houses or even creates unique designs. This increases their intelligence so good, many primary schools set up this game to study students about creativity.
In conclusion, I believe that the positive impacts on video games or having outside activities are equally and I recommend parents should balance between these two types of entertainment to take care of their children perfectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26838235294 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70104016472 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.419736589 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329166166183 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113695751967 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814946684142 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186996297298 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445825539235 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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