The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of making chocolate.
Overall, there are 10 steps in this process to make chocolate. The first step is collecting ripe red pods in the cacao trees and the last step is using machines to press cacao powders into liquid chocolate.
First of all, It is true that cocoa comes from cacao trees, which are made in South America, Africa, Indonesia, and when the pods are ripe and turn red, they will be harvested. The next step is removing the pod shells to collect white cacao beans inside. Secondly, these beans will be fermented before spreading on the ground so they can dry by the sun lights. Thirdly, these beans will be put in large sacks and transported by trains or lorries to the factory to manufacture. In addition, these raw cacao beans will be sent in the oven and roasted at a high temperature, of 350 degrees. In addition, beans will be crushed to remove shells and turned into powders by the machine. Finally, after being crushed into powders, it will be pressed by inner parts to turn into chocolate liquid.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38946893662 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586021505376 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4058134623 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309311868333 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218035502966 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414111093225 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554765212721 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565353313256 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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