Much research these days have shown that adolescence prefers online communicating methods to see people in real life. This is occurring due to the advancement of the internet community and teenagers’ psychological health. To give teenagers motivation to meet people in person, family’s encouragements are very necessary as well as educating about disadvantages of living unrealistic.
As can be seen, internet society has never been developed as significantly as before. It is believed that social media make an enormous connection to everyone who has joined overseas. This makes the online world become attractive and diverse. Moreover, adolescence always has to face many psychological problems and if they spend an inconsequential amount of time will make a bad effection on their mind and feelings. For example, with an enormous time spent online, a significant proportion of teenagers in Japan are now afraid of meeting people in person. This results in dramatic consequences such as unknown deaths, a sharp decrease in the number of children, …etc.
Methods are significantly necessary to deal with these serious situations. Firstly is family care and education. Family always is the basis of someone’s development. Encouragement from loving people can prevent the worst effect of social media. Secondly is the right education from the government and school, this is as important as family. The government should promulgate the right methods to illustrate the way of using the internet correctly. For example, prohibiting people under validate ages to see or watch violent pictures or videos are now applying in most social media and it showing an expected result.
In conclusion, advancements of social media make preference of teenagers about social communicating and this should be prevented by family encouragements as well as government and school help. Not only for teaching a good generation but also for civilization increase.
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 56
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage of our natural environment What are the causes and solutions 84
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons for immigration To what consequences can it lead 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: Much research; A good deal of research
Many research these days have shown that adolescence ...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...sharp decrease in the number of children,…etc. Methods are significantly necessar...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...ly is family care and education. Family always is the basis of someone’s development. Enc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53177257525 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22653218635 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0754792612 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171695893756 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481010086505 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537649173394 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115079303414 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723322709636 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.