Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that online learning is becoming a prevalent feature of tertiary education. Although there are some drawbacks of internet-based learning, i would argue that there are far more benefits.
The disadvantage of online courses is the lack of real interactions between teachers and students. Students may not have the opportunity to discuss with their teachers through face- to face communication, they have to reply on written forms of communication instead. In addition ,students have a tendency to be distracted from convincing apps,interesting games during studying on the website. Students do not need to adhere to disciplines which are informed in universities, so they learn online lessons and chatting or playing game.
Despite the given demerits, i believe there are a number of advantages from online courses from universities. Firstly, students can get access to higher education with a flexible schedule. As students have their own job including a full-time job or a part-time job , so they need a versatile timetable to balance work and study ,which could not find in any lecture.Secondly, learners can pursue studying in reputable universities regardless of geographical location. For example, Harvard, one of the prestigious universities in the world, offers a wide range of online courses such as art and design, data science,business and management and so on for students who come from other countries. Ultimately, it reduces the financial burden on students and parents. It is obvious that the cost of most of the online lesson is more affordable than that of lecture at colleges and universities.
In my conclusion, i suppose that the benefits of online courses outweigh any negatives
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39776951673 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27199531796 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8811861535 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128544941933 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467784004959 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431886495261 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869216065105 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033296907917 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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