The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the chart illustrates the information about three distinct population changes namely fertility rate, morality rate and population growth rate in Scotland form 1940 to 2020
overall, it is clearly evident that while the rate of birth and population growth are predicted to experience the falling trend, death rate is anticipated the opposite trend. Interestingly, the growth's population rate is consistently lover than others during given time.
in the first year,1940, the birth rate hit its peak at exactly 2.5% compared to 1.5% and approximately 0.8% of death rate and population growth rate respectively. over the following 25 years the 25 years, the population growth rate hit its the highest point, 1.5%. Morality rate and birth rate saw the decreasing trend with roughly 2%,0.5% in turns
in 2020, the death rate is projected to undergo the rising tend with 0.7% after a slightly decrease time from 1975, the population growth, by contrast, has a prediction to see no changes from the lowest figure in 2003. regarding the rate of fertility, before standing at nearly 0.7 % in 2020, it went down gradually from 1.3% in 1970 and under 1% in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... compared to 1.5% and approximately 0.8% of death rate and population growth rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10052910053 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72190254466 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1614316657 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0405365018386 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181162687036 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269487353756 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321253456773 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158474537144 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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