The countrysides are observing a migration due to its young population abandoning it for the big cities. The settlement of younger ones has left the rural areas with only the older generation. The essay will start with explaining the consequences of the migration, after that it would propose remedies to prevent further movement.
If the migration continues to happen, the development of the countryside will be affected. A younger, stronger and healthy workforce is prerequisite for any development work. Be it the construction of roads and houses, educating and mentoring the school children. Moreover, the senior citizens will have no one to take care off; In the old age, they need and expect support, care from their young counterparts which would be hard.
To prevent further leaving of the youngster from their hometown, their problems need to be addressed. Most of the migrations happen in search of better opportunities. The young want good jobs, better healthcare, schools and infrastructures like roads, water and electricity. The Governing bodies should listen to the problems faced by the rural population. A proposal needs to be drafted listing all the concerns. Further, a dedicated roadmap should be set up to eradicate the migration.
All in all, the migration of the young population is of serious concerns. If not checked, not only will it hinder the development of the countryside but also but impact the older population of the migrated area. The Government needs to intervene and stop the adversity faced by both the younger and older people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22529644269 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98282040673 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2150641281 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136275681678 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04237621687 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372489020569 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078549922531 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221527510897 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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