Sonme people think the best way to solve traffiic congestion in cities is to provide freepublic transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Is it good or bad, to what extent do you agree?
When it comes to the issue about how to tackle traffic congestion, some people argue that the best solution is to offer the citizens free public transport all the time. To be honest, I am not approval of this opinion for several reasons.
To begin with, providing people with sufficient means of free public transport for 24 hours a day definitely consumes the national budget an enormous amount of fee. The government will have to take responsibility for paying multiple type of cost, such as to upgrade the infrastructure or installing more road signals. Moreover, more people choosing to use free public transport also mean that government would lose the road vehicles. This leads to the fact that governments not only have to pay the investment for public transport but they are also put under heavily economic burdens from the loss of tax payments.
Furthermore, a lot of people can lose their job cause just a few continue to use the other traveling services. It is obvious that the increase of people using public transport occurs simultaneously with the decrease of taxi users and the private parking. This makes people working in these fields become unemployees as their services are no longer in use. Therefore, the economies of some countries, especially the developing, will be seriously stagnated because of lack of work force.
On the other hands, offering free public transport all the time also bring many benefits to the whole society. The atmosphere is much fresher because there is not as much fossil fumes as before. Besides, how to travel will not be the top concern of people with lower financial condition anymore.
In the nutshell, although providing free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week has a number of benefits, its drawbacks, such as huge cost f investment or the higher rate of unemployment seem to be much more noticeable by the whole community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stment for public transport but they are also put under heavily economic burdens ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9592476489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72659163477 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5346918653 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148118733105 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478723432651 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576537699966 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872448708069 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566624067578 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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