Space exploration and tourism, Since the first human being stepped on moon, it is undeclared competition between two giant industrialized countries US and Russia. There are few positive and negative effects lies behind space tourism.In this context I'm going to discuss about space travel and its consequences before drawing cogent solution.
Before 21st century, headlines wrote about the space tourist who has invested billion dollars on space research and travel then succeeded, finally landed on moon, this leads to so many innovational ideas towards space travel. Most of the countries are contributing part of their funds on space tourism, and it is indeed an unforgettable life experience. Some people think the that life on earth is battling distinction, and other planets will be our lost heaven. They are looking forward to this trip and that forced immigration of life from the earth.They value it as an evitable plan for the future.
On the other hand, such expensive travel drain the funds for less benefits, only rich people can contribute to this. This fund wasted will be at the expenses of other vital services that matters most of all countries health care, education and mankind well being. Secondly, The research involves lot of efforts and some times it costs the life of our renowned scientists. Finally, Most of the countries are considering the space tourism is prestigious, and trying to achieve it, this tendency leads to combats with neighbor countries.
To sum up, Space tourism is an exiting and adventures trip though it is costly only rich can afford it. But, if the big fat people incurred those funds in some other activities, will be helpful to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11510791367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63523520245 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3438467063 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125161047461 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047658584625 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432694148925 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839273252258 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398282430634 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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