In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, although our agriculture are improved day by day but many people on the planet can’t get enough food to survive is a hot topic for debate. This essay will discuss the cause of this problem and some measurement that we can take to overcome this problem.
There are various of reasons of why many people go hungry while human have better agriculture. Firstly, despite of the develop of technology all over the world , some countries still have poor agriculture. In fact, many nations have execellent technique to produce food for resident while some others can’t">can’t feed themselves due to the lack of experiences, natural disaters like floods, drought, stoms to name but a few. Consequently, it is impossible for them to provide food for their people. Moreover, one of the major reason lead to the starve of many people on the world is war. For instance, a war between two nations can destroy the enviroments and force people to focus on the battle. Thus, many people have to fight each others instead of working on their farm or the soil and the water may will be poisoned due to the chemical come from weapons.
To combat with this problem, we can take some actions in order to solve those problems. one of the effective solution is developed countries may help the others country in improving their agriculture. developed nations can support many things such as tools, money and technical experts to some others countries to rebuild their agriculture. Furthermore, every goverments should deal with each others by exchange information and stop using violence to reach their own purpose. this action will help many people avoid the starvey death. Last but not least, we have to raise the social awarness about the important of agriculture. For example, protecting the habitat is necessary for the development of agriculture or government should encourage farmers, researcher, students upgrade the technique in farmming.
In conclusion, despite of the development of agriculture , many people around the planet still have to live whereas they can’t get enough food. However, I believe that , together human can take some actions and solve that problem easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17366946779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91718910665 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8223757229 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.611111111 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267742136303 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886650599691 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655571654909 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174616943564 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319561134172 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.