in spite if the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is the case?What can be dine about this?
Inexorable technological innovations have been experienced in recent years. Many achievements have been applied in agricultural field so as to enhance the quantity and quality. Despite all the progress, a number of people are suffering from food shortage.
Disproportionate economy is the results of rapid development. Parallel with the economy growth, the gap between poverty and wealth will increase. Many people are not educated enough to pursue the trend, so they would be unemployed or remain with low-paid manual work. As a consequence, they are not capable of affording food. Unequal growth happens on a global scale, amount different countries and continents. Africa is a typical hot spot of famine. Fatalities are not rare due to lack of food. Meanwhile, abundance of food provisions are wasted in many developed countries. Moreover, natural disasters together with epidemics would put human into starvation. All of crops and poverty may disappear after one enormous flood or a pandemic will procrastinate
laboring, and people run out of food.
tackling with this issue demands modified economic structure. The government should formulate employment for people and conduct some subsidized policies. Developed nations had better assist power countries and invest in industry there to provide a permanent lives. Western countries can sponsor
underprivileged African countries to overcome hunger and even give them direction to supply themselves food.
Human's lives ought to be prioritized rather than industry, technology or finance. Eating is the most essential demand so that dealing with famine is un urgent duty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...have been applied in agricultural field so as to enhance the quantity and quality. Despi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... low-paid manual work. As a consequence, they are not capable of affording food. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tackling
... laboring, and people run out of food. tackling with this issue demands modified econom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60483870968 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96988877469 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697580645161 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8510820903 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1578947368 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0526315789 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898252947321 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224832940671 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275539537722 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042497592682 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229771967109 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.31 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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