Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular .
• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter or message.
Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or study. For example, if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to coffee shop and go back home .
Secondly , people can easily save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are saved and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to receive from my friend.
• On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communicate is choosed by many people .
On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use written communication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have to use keyboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at coffee shop to write message.
Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the relationship is more close .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time 67
- Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys 73
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Write about the following topic Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 56
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ay , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing ....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lieved that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , th...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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... by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to so...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ing is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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..., this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or mes...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...able to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular . ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at using letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: ,
...ge more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...pend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...irstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication i...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmunication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too m...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or stu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to cof...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rs going to coffee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save m...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ffee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save memory with wri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save memory with writt...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing lett...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are save...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Example
...d and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk...
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Suggestion: ,
...veryone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk t...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to re...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r I used to receive from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communi...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en communicate is choosed by many people . On top of that , many people are usu...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...oosed by many people . On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use w...
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Suggestion: ,
...mmunication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have ...
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Line 11, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...yboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at scho...
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Suggestion: ,
...pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I rea...
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...n to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I reall...
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Suggestion: ,
...n fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at co...
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Suggestion: ,
...ee shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to me...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the r...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cation so the relationship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some r...
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Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...onship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81893589565 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0190820404 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157471996853 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709939208904 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676890105492 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829708996245 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656397595652 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better t...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing ....
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Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lieved that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , th...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to so...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent ...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or mes...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular . ...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at using letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that p...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spen...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...pend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many tim...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...irstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication i...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmunication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too m...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or stu...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to cof...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rs going to coffee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save m...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ffee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save memory with wri...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee shop and go back home . Secondly , people can easily save memory with writt...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing lett...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are save...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Example
...d and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...veryone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk t...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to re...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r I used to receive from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communi...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en communicate is choosed by many people . On top of that , many people are usu...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oosed by many people . On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use w...
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Line 11, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mmunication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have ...
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Line 11, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...yboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at scho...
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Line 11, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I rea...
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Line 11, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I reall...
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Line 11, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at co...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ee shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to me...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet ...
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Line 13, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the r...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cation so the relationship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some r...
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Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81893589565 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0190820404 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157471996853 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709939208904 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676890105492 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829708996245 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656397595652 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.