These days , it is believed that communication by speaking is more important than communicate by writing letters or messages . Although , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that people should use using written communication .
On the one hand , I am convinced that conversation by receiving letters or messages has some advantages . Firstly ,the content of the conversation can be saved. This has existed for a long time . Accordingly , people could review their memory whenever they want. Secondly , people would not take plenty of time to meet directly with each other . To be honest, going out to the coffee shop where people hang out with their friends could take many hours, which makes the majority of people don't want to meet friends because they are so tired after a busy day .
On the other hand , it is understandable why most people choose to keep in touch by speaking . On top of that , I believe that having physical interaction in a real life where people could talk directly with each other is very enjoyable. The gathering is more fascinating because people have more opportunities to show their emotions . Furthermore , people would avoid eye diseases which are caused by smartphones and abusing the Internet could also cause many consequences such as low vision or blindness . In addition , reducing time on smartphones could help users avoid phone addiction .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meetings. I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 73
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08745247148 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79346766846 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5272583816 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896410402711 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331169142133 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743248716251 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792779188464 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122154026677 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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