Technology dominates human life today. It has been inter woven in our routine life. In the present days some University or schools student are more rely on the Internet and television than teacher. Some other believe students attending in the class is a vital role play than other sources. Therefore, it is your own opinion. I give my opinion in the following paragraph.
Initially, the government make a new schools and Universities for students and engaged a good knowledgeable teachers which can teach of basic values such as moral, tolerance and caring. In addition, some things become more utility in the future. Secondly, when students do study in the classroom at that time they can be face-to-face conversation with the teacher on the study related topic and they can be enhance your confident. The strong example, only teachers are very close familiar to the students, however it is is well vulnerable to the students which know what is the subject student do not very well understand.
On the other hand, Technology has increased the education level. The internet and television has make study very easy. For instance, the students can do a lot of research on the Internet or YouTube and get a good knowledge about History, cultures and studies. Besides, students also learn a skill which is very useful for their future jobs such as, they learn to write a report using a word processor which can be very useful tools for applying the jobs letters. Students can study at their own place. Therefore, Technology make lessons much more interesting and exciting.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that issue of some students should be study in the classroom and should not much rely on the other gadgets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: interred
...dominates human life today. It has been inter woven in our routine life. In the prese...
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Suggestion: teacher
...udents and engaged a good knowledgeable teachers which can teach of basic values such as...
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...se familiar to the students, however it is is well vulnerable to the students which k...
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...ll vulnerable to the students which know what is the subject student do not very ...
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Message: Did you mean 'studied'?
Suggestion: studied
...d that issue of some students should be study in the classroom and should not much re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95221843003 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63715434645 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.1030668223 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251825881493 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733590794073 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661817725634 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142943695405 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587580182141 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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