Happiness is a state of mind. Many times people remain happy in small things such as tender child get a toys, at that time they are make top of the world. Here, two type of person believe about happiness as own glade is connected to financial achievement and other things different type of things play important role in happiness. Therefore, before commenting on my decision both the opinion would be discussed.
Initially, I would explain a first side in this phenomenon. Happiness means different to different people. Fist and foremost, when people have a lot of money at that time they have own house, business, new clothes, etc and your life filled with fun and enjoyment. On other side, when people have a lack of necessary things they do very struggle in your life.
Other than that, many types happiness rely on different tools, when people enjoy good quality time with your kith and kin. In add, hobbies, sports, games can be source of fun and enjoyment. Besides, other people define happiness is something a deeper such as a people get a sense of achievement from their work. Time and again, people are on seventh heaven from your traditional customs so that religion or a sense of purpose can also be a source of happiness. The strong example, when school children do achieved 95 percentage in your 10 standard so there no boundary of happiness.
In conclude, it can said that the issue of economic success is play crucial role as well as other factors are equally important in our journey of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77186311787 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5110319129 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5208723089 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227551338096 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741899958321 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051201660264 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136945087656 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213733622061 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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