Holding an overseas sports event is believed to bring several benefits for the host. Others argue that this will not carry anything but drawbacks. In my point of view, hosting a massive international sports event will lead to indisputable perks. This essay will discuss both sides of the problem and depict my personal view.
To begin with, it is impossible to avoid an aspect's drawbacks, for that reason, an enormous physical competition will have some unexpected consequences. Firstly, the number of expenses will not stay under control and that will be a huge cost. The host will have to shoulder responsibilities to care about the athlete's diet, accommodation, entertainment, etc. Furthermore, the amount of money which is going to be spent on facilities and machines can be overwhelming. Secondly, some activities will be postponed or temporarily canceled. For example, citizens who live near the stadium will have to move out.
On the other hand, I agree that it is an honor for the city which will be chosen to be the host. Undeniably, an international event that will be shown worldwide will be an ideal opportunity for tourism advertising. For instance, Japan had demonstrated its wonderful culture by holding the 2020 Olympics, such as kimono or anime. This will be increasingly effective on the city's income. Tourists or athletes will definitely pay for symbolic items or souvenirs. Local restaurants, hotels, and parks will get a huge profit after the event. Moreover, successfully hosting an overseas event will show the world the city's tourism and finance potential. People will be impressed by the magnificent sceneries and the dedication. A prime example, Japan had done an excellent job when showing the world their cutting-edge technology through light performance.
In conclusion, although has some aftermaths but having the chance to represent the international sports to host an event will bring numerous advantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2783171521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04724822859 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2288449994 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161793300477 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592972844075 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566112497428 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13267648779 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580365618139 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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