Study show that many criminals have a low level of education for this reason people believe that the bestway to reduce crime is to educate people in prison. So that they can get a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree
Excellence in education is the need of our for young learner. Presently ,
massive number of masses are indulge in criminal activities only because of their illetracy. So, on this account folk claims that providing academic skills to them will be considered as the lucrative panecea so that they will get employment after leaving this cage. Here i would accord for this statement.
There are plethora of points to endorse this phenomena. First and foremost, education leads to a path towards a secured future which they can get by the way of jobs opportunities after their imprisonment because of that they work around the clock which distract their mind from illegal activities and able to earn their two square meal and secure themselves financially. However,which will be result as worthwhile for the society.
What is more, endorsing academic skills to them will leads to enrich moral and social values in their lives in order to create awareness about the inadequate results of this delequency. Apart from it, it will offers them high quality of life and can learn how to live or how to behave in the society. Thus, it will result as best solution to curb this situation.
By contrast, others have conflicting views too. Further more, it is believed to say that government should impose hard and fadt rules so that they will think thousands a time while indulging in these life threatening activities and also provide them practical level of education thus, they cannot face any obstacle and be in the race of this world without traping in these crimes.
To recapitulate, criminal activities spreading its roots in every nook and corner of this world so, administration should take proactive steps to combat this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...need of our for young learner. Presently , massive number of masses are indulge i...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...esently , massive number of masses are indulge in criminal activities only because of ...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mployment after leaving this cage. Here i would accord for this statement. Th...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...There are plethora of points to endorse this phenomena. First and foremost, educatio...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...d secure themselves financially. However,which will be result as worthwhile for the so...
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Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... endorsing academic skills to them will leads to enrich moral and social values in th...
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Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...this delequency. Apart from it, it will offers them high quality of life and can learn...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'these lives'?
Suggestion: this life; these lives
...ink thousands a time while indulging in these life threatening activities and also provide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, while, apart from, by the way, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05226480836 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66652198682 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.7949515546 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17797768914 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060239022668 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365929814238 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941499445741 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330439596981 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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