These days many families move abroab for work.some people believe that this would be benefit for children.other think it make their life more complicated.give your opinion.
Now a days, mobility among masses is gaining ground radically. Presently, some proportion of folks advocates that migrating from their nation to overseas to indulge in working sector will be considered beneficial for juveniles while other claims that this will make their world sophisticated.here i would account for both the sides with my own prescription.
There are plethora of points to shore up this phenomena.first and foremost, moving to abroad will offer privelage to juveniles juveniles for inheriting higher quality education.to exemplify, they will get practical as well as theoritical knowledge which will enhance their academic skills and uplift their standard of health,wealth and good relationship thus, also be a developed nation.
What is more, by lifting the whole weight of responsibilities on their shoulder in that age will turn them into self dependent person. In order to ourselve construct stairs of development. However, by burning midnight oil can able to found a path toward their brightest future. Moreover, by living in alien land masses will learn about their culture and language which will be helpfull for them to live in this modern era.
On the contrary, it has throny side too. To commence with,by holding heavy loard of responsibilities juveniles will not get time for their health which will halt their physical and psychlogical growth and having hectic lifestyle because of which they give their precious time to themselves and in small age become responsible and stressful person like an adult. Which will leads to loss of their young age amusement. Beside it, by engaging in western culture will have lighten up adverse effects on their cultural and moral values and by the day forgot traditional values.
From my notion, both sides hold their valid grounds. So, we cannot support or go against any of the side. But according to mine prescription juveniles should migrate to abroad to be in this modern and competitive world.
To recapitulate,government should take proactive steps to eradicate its darker side. So that our thriving nation will underestimate the development of other rustic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33923303835 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03834235472 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643067846608 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.039937494 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159324270118 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446847442263 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506466331433 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845305084995 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520965116091 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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