The picture below show the plan of walton museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012 after it was redeveloped.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrate about the structure of place of historical things named as walton museum in 2008 and after renovation in 2012.
In the year 2008,after entering there is reception and next to it reading room and below it cloak room is constructed afterwards stairs, shops and special exhibition room nearer to each other.
Turning to 2012 dynamic changes had took place as there is roof situated above the enterance hall and special exhibition hall is still constant at its place.moreover,a restaurant newly built and recently reception and cloak room are merged but there is no change took place in the location of shop. Beside it, a tomb like structure made presently as like on the ground floor therecis play room for offsprings and reading room above of it and self service cafe modernly builded and on the top of it there is exhibition room snd lift service provided.
The overall trend depicting the whole development of a place occured within 4 years.
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- These days many families move abroab for work.some people believe that this would be benefit for children.other think it make their life more complicated.give your opinion. 89
- The picture below show the plan of walton museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012 after it was redeveloped summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 93
- In some country few people are with extremely high salary.some people think it is good for country while other believe government should limit their salaries.discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
- Study show that many criminals have a low level of education for this reason people believe that the bestway to reduce crime is to educate people in prison. So that they can get a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree 73
- The government should pay salary to the women who are raising their children without job Do you agree or fisagree with given statement 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... is still constant at its place.moreover,a restaurant newly built and recently rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64754946015 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.828119852 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.8 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0694479765245 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465529592096 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585811865826 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569934941058 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609874538265 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.