To succeed in a business, one needs to know math’s. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
Math has long been one of the core subjects at schools around the world, and it is obviously useful in a lot of area such as science or economy. While one school of thought holds that business people need to have mathematics knowledge in order to become successful in their career, I believe that people who excel problem solving skills and communicating skill could succeed without knowing math.
To commence with, the working systems in companies are complex and the co-workers, especially managers need to have solid experiences in solving problems that might accidentally happen. To give an example, if an important meeting is about to begin but the presenter is late, a professional personnel would know how to deal with the customers, such as showing them other parts of the plan before the presenter come. It is evident that people with good problem solving skills have the likelihood to come further on their career path since they could handle any surprise unfortunate situations.
Additionally, communicating is also a vital skill for those who wish to succeed in their business because this job requires them to communicate with various kinds of customers. If they lack this essential skill, they would not be able to make contracts or launch any campaign, which means there is no future for such people. Therefore, it can be seen that people who are good at math but terrible at communicating would still be left behind those who are communication experts but bad at mathematics.
In conclusion, I contend that individuals can still be succeed in a company or corporation without knowing math for some aforementioned reasons. Therefore, mature pupils who are about to start a business should equip themselves with other soft skills such as the mentioned skills besides core subjects at school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09731543624 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80594106433 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5739482337 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.9 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131377716578 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561645567537 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546056154026 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926178678263 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061467846859 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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