Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As people’s living standards have been improved, these days, each person tend to own a personal vehicle, including teenagers. Some argue that the most effective solution for road collision and traffic congestion is to increase the minimum age for driving license. As far as my opinion is concerned, I totally agree with this opinion and this essay will present my reasons.
To commence with, young people, especially those who are at the age of sixteen to eighteen, are often unable to control their behaviors. This is because they tend to follow the one-in-a-lifetime style and do not consider the consequences before doing something wrong. Drinking alcohol during driving, for example, has been observed in a lot of teenagers in many countries. Such actions could cause accidents, which in the worst case, leads to death.
Furthermore, people at older ages would have more experiences. Therefore, they would be able to handle certain situations on roads more precisely. To take an example, if a little dog suddenly cross the road while a person was not paying attention, those who are young and inexperienced would easily hit the dog or other objects on the road while those with years of experiences would not. As a result, people should only drive cars or ride motorbikes when they are experienced enough.
In conclusion, while people in today’s modern world have the tendency to buy personal transportations for themselves and their family members, I believe that the minimum age for legal driving license should be increased for the aforementioned justifications. Additionally, young citizens should be aware of their own actions and behave responsibly for not only their safety but also that of others.
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views 67
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 61
- Two maps show the change of a coastal town called Pentland from 1950 to 2007 100
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2274368231 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90296259103 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5175785609 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248974326461 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077785507862 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840901729542 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134420986737 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508466880782 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.